Explore Real, Impactful University Essays

See what successful applicants wrote to gain admission to top Canadian universities. Browse real, high-quality essays across various programs to understand what works—and use them as inspiration to craft your own standout application.

Text describing a personal experience with starting a business, focusing on entrepreneurship and leadership development.

Queens University, Bachelor of Commerce, January 2024

Dalhousie, Computer Science, January 2024

Essay about leadership in a school project, focusing on a gym renovation fundraiser. Describes challenges, team efforts, and successful outcomes along with personal growth.
An essay about organizing a fundraiser for a food bank in high school, demonstrating community service influences.

University of Toronto, Psychology, November 2023

Western University, Health Sciences, December 2024

Text excerpt titled "From Teamwork to Triumph: How Sports Shaped My Character and Ambitions," describing personal growth and learning from sports experience, focusing on teamwork, leadership, and perseverance.

University of Alberta, Engineering, September 2023

Text describing a personal challenge during a cross-country race and lessons learned about resilience and self-belief.

University of British Columbia, Political Science, May 2023

Text image of a personal essay about moving to a new country. It describes challenges faced, such as feeling invisible and adapting to an unfamiliar environment. The writer overcomes fears by joining clubs and initiating friendships, learning adaptability and resilience.

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